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Cat Rescue & Rehoming => The Rescue Room => Topic started by: Sabrina (Auferstehen) on October 17, 2007, 12:49:11 PM

Title: Help me write a blurb for the foster kittens!
Post by: Sabrina (Auferstehen) on October 17, 2007, 12:49:11 PM

I'll be adding Harley & Quinn onto the CAT77 Leeds branch Homing Page on CatChat.org.... but if I write this on my own it will be about 8 pages long and I'll miss something vital!

So I'm asking for help on what to write (I'm on the catchat homing page team but I don't normally write the blurbs).

Names: Harley & Quinn
Sex: Female
Age: 6 months
Colour: Harley - Black & White semi long hair, Quinn - Black short hair
Med: both spayed, vacc'd

Both are shy but Harley will come up for fuss, Quinn loves to play but isn't sure of being touched yet. Must stay together and probably not good around children as they can scare easily.

What have I missed? Should I re-word something?

Title: Re: Help me write a blurb for the foster kittens!
Post by: Gill (sneakiefeline) on October 17, 2007, 13:01:52 PM

I think its nice to make it sound a bit more personal. so something like this  ;D

Harley and Quinn are 6 month old female kittens, both are neatered and vaccinated.

Harley says I am a  black and white  with semi-long fur and I am a bit shy but I do like a nice fuss made of me and once I get to know you I will be a loving cat.

Quinn says I have black short fur I am much shyer than my sister, although I do love to play. I am not quite sure about being touched yet but I am sure I will get round to it if you play with me a lot and are kind and gentle

We must be homed together and cos we scared easy we would not like to live with children.

Title: Re: Help me write a blurb for the foster kittens!
Post by: hOrZa on October 17, 2007, 13:06:20 PM

Gill are you an estate agent by any chance :rofl:

Title: Re: Help me write a blurb for the foster kittens!
Post by: Sabrina (Auferstehen) on October 17, 2007, 14:04:49 PM

Gill that's brilliant!

I really am a rubbish writer, but that's why editors were created :)

 :evillaugh:

Title: Re: Help me write a blurb for the foster kittens!
Post by: Gill (sneakiefeline) on October 17, 2007, 14:09:00 PM

Just noticed a typo in it grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. just seen another hisssssssssssssssss!

No not an estate agent  :rofl:

I am a volunteer on CC doing this though but sadly my rescues dont give me an oppportunity to to write like this cos they dont give enough info  :'( :'(

Title: Re: Help me write a blurb for the foster kittens!
Post by: Sam (Fussy_Furball) on October 17, 2007, 20:44:25 PM

If that doesn't get these two sweeties a home I'll eat my hat!  :rofl:

Title: Re: Help me write a blurb for the foster kittens!
Post by: Sabrina (Auferstehen) on October 17, 2007, 21:00:08 PM

Quote from: Sam (Fussy_Furball) on October 17, 2007, 20:44:25 PM

If that doesn't get these two sweeties a home I'll eat my hat!  :rofl:

What sort of hat we talking about here? Just for future reference!

 :evillaugh:

Title: Re: Help me write a blurb for the foster kittens!
Post by: Sam (Fussy_Furball) on October 17, 2007, 21:13:34 PM

It doesn't matter ... I won't be eating it cuz these girls WILL get a home  ;)